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Instant Family



     October 2010

At twenty one Chloe Gardiner put life on hold to raise her three orphaned stepsiblings. When teenage Sebastian gets into police trouble Chloe is shocked. When Seb befriends the man whose property he vandalised, she is horrified, convinced the friendship will be short-lived.

Initially reluctant to involve himself with Seb's rehabilitation, divorced architect Alex  Bergmann is surprised by his unexpected friendship with the boy and realises Seb and his twin brother crave adult male company. Pretty Chloe has not only neglected her own life but begun to smother theirs.

Chloe is determined not to be distracted by an attractive man whose longterm motives she can't trust. She daydreams of a life free from children when she can finish her music degree. Can Alex convince her their dreams can co-exist?

Alex sat up abruptly in bed, wide-eyed in the darkness. A noise. Outside. A siren wailed in the distance. Not that, something else. Closer. Loud enough to wake him.
       Silence.
       A thud, scuffling feet, a scraping sound.
       Ears straining he tossed back the sheet. Two strides and he was at the window  peering carefully through the slats of the vertical blind at the narrow view of the front garden. Nothing.Hot. Dark. Still. Deep shadows from the liquid amber created black holes in the night. Frowning, he let the blind fall into place and groped for the bedside light switch. Better check on Steffie while he was awake. No real need, just the freely admitted pleasure of having her under his roof on their fortnightly weekend together. Short snatches of time to delight in his daughter.
       Alex padded across the passageway to the spare room where the elephant shaped night light cast a soft yellow glow. One softly rounded hand rested on the pillow, a tumble of dark silky hair obscured her face. A smile stretched his lips as he touched fingers to his mouth and blew her a kiss from the doorway.
       Crash!
       What the? At the side. Glass breaking. Steffie stirred, rolled over, settled back into sleep.
       Alex darted for the family room and the sliding door. The outside sensor light hadn't come on but the quarter moon cast enough of a silvery glow to show darkly fleeing figures, maybe three. Precious moments lost fumbling with the lock, a muttered curse, the door dragged open. Alex sprinted across the tiled terrace, leapt the low hedge of ornamental lavender and thyme, landed on grass, prickly and dry underfoot. Ran.
       The catch on the side gate slowed them, gave him time for a desperate lunge amid swearing and panicked cries of, "I can't open the gate", "Hurry. He'll get us." Kids.
       The gate swung wide, the dark mass of bodies moved. Alex's fingers clutched cloth and hung on. 
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Briing-briing. Briing-briing. Briing -- briing.
       Chloe stretched out a leaden arm, flopped it about in search of the phone, made contact, somehow managed to find the button, silenced the unbearable shrieking.
       "Hello," she croaked, eyes closed.
       "Constable Brent Burrows from the City Watch House. Sorry to disturb you. Is that Chloe Gardiner?"
       "Yes." Chloe's brain and body sprang to alert. Her pulse rate trebled in an instant, the hand holding the phone began to tremble. Cold sweat beaded her face and body. A suddenly closed throat choked the words. "Has something happened? An accident?"
       Unbearable, unthinkable, that such crushing disaster could happen again.Her mind ran frantically through the possibilities in the second it took him to respond. Katy. Asleep. Julian and Seb. Asleep. Grandmother Simone. Definitely at home at -- Chloe's fearful gaze shot to the red numbers on the bedside clock--three fifteen. She switched the reading light on, blinked painfully at the onslaught of vision.
       "Not an accident, Miss Gardiner. We have your brother Sebastian here. He was caught trespassing and there's been some vandalism. We'd like you to come to the station, please."
       Chloe sprang out of bed, body stiff with indignation. "That's impossible. He's at home, asleep."
       "Would you check, please, Miss?" Patient almost to the point of boredom.But Chloe was already charging along the corridor to Seb's room. The hall light came on and Julian stood yawning and rubbing his eyes, straw colored hair amok.
       "What's up? Who's on the phone?"
       "The police think Seb's a vandal." Chloe pushed the bedroom door open. "I told them he's asleep." But her voice faded on the last word because Seb wasn't asleep, he wasn't in bed at all. He wasn't in the room.
       She raised the phone slowly to her ear, hand trembling. "He's not here."

Contemporary Romance
Rating: 4 Cups

Chloe has had the responsibility of her three half siblings since the death of their parents five years ago. She is a talented musician. The losses of her parents and sister have made her hold the remaining family a bit close.

Alex is a successful architect. He is divorced with one child, a difficult daughter. He is very handsome and not interested in marrying again.

Chloe is very upset when her younger brother is arrested for vandalism and various other crimes. She has been doing her best with him and his brother and sister since the death of the rest of their family, and it has not been easy. She has left school and has very little life other than work and caring for the four of them. One of the victims agrees to let Sebastian work off the damage. Alex is very handsome and there is an attraction between them. Her responsibilities and his less than lovable daughter make things difficult.

I enjoyed this quick read. The characters were likable and very real with all of the failings and strengths of normal people. There were some interesting plot twists to keep things interesting. I recommend this one for those looking for a quick and entertaining read.

Maura
Reviewer for Coffee Time Romance & More

REVIEWS
Contemporary Romance

Australia - Present Day

Chloe Gardiner is both confused and furious when she is awoken in the middle of the night and asked to pick up her brother from the police station.  When their parents died during a terrorist attack five years earlier, Chloe quit University in order take on guardianship over her younger half-siblings, and this is the first time there’s been any sort of trouble with one of them.  Learning that fourteen-year-old Sebastian has snuck out of the house and been vandalizing homes is a shock, and she can’t help but wonder what she is doing wrong.  Having the victim accuse her of being a bad parent doesn’t help matters at all, and the attraction she’d felt for the man before he opened his mouth dies a very quick death.

Enraged over the damage done to his home, Alex Bergman is glad that he caught at least one of the miscreants, and later lashes out at the young woman he assumes is the mother.  He’s a bit thrown when she asks if he’s never made a mistake, and then mortified to find out the family situation.  His attempts to apologize only convince him that he’s terrified the young woman and, hoping to ease things with her, he reluctantly agrees to have Sebastian clean up the mess and work off his debt.

Alex has always put his work first, to the point that even his time with his own daughter is limited, so he’s surprised to find himself drawn into the Gardiner family.  Sebastian and his twin, Julian, begin to look to him as the man in his life, and he enjoys the relationship they are building.  It isn’t long before Alex’s admiration for Chloe quickly turns into something more serious.  But is Chloe ready for another INSTANT FAMILY?

Chloe is a woman who took on too much responsibility at a young age, with no one to help her.  The love of her step-father helped her heal a bit from the hurt inflicted by a biological father who rejected her before she was even born, but when her mom and step-father (along with her older sister) were killed, Chloe’s boyfriend took off pretty quick, and so she’s reluctant to trust men.  Her initial impressions of Alex don’t give her much hope that he’ll stick around beyond Sebastian’s paying off his debt, so Chloe is having some difficulty with Alex’s inclusion into their family’s life.  Alex, who only sees his daughter every other weekend, has put his work first, so she does have reason to doubt him.  Yet, as he gets to know Sebastian and watches the Gardiner family’s dynamic, things start to change for Alex...but not before it causes some problems on the romantic front.

While mainly about Chloe and Alex, the children are also featured pretty prominently throughout the book.  Sebastian and Julian are teenagers who could desperately use a positive male influence, and eleven-year-old Katy is a mini-matchmaker in the works.  Alex’s six-year old daughter Stephanie is still struggling with being shuttled between two parents, having a sickly infant brother, and a mother more involved with her new life, so she’s a bit of a spoiled brat for a good portion of the book—yet another thing to test the fledgling relationship between Chloe and Alex.  An emotion-packed story of family and love, look for INSTANT FAMILY.

Jennifer Bishop

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